This is NOT a piece that I have given my best to , I needed more time , but since the deadline is this Thursday, I have to publish it now..
Listening and Speaking Class
In a world where rules stand unbroken, and words remain unspoken
The Truth Must Be Revealed
where pretending has been chosen, has become a population theme.
a Pretender who i was obliged to be.... and freedom!!!?
Freedom was left for my wildest dream
In a world where air exists but feels so hard to breath, where feelings are kept as secrets to conceal
The Truth Must Be Revealed
In a world full of Lies and decceits, where only hypocrites would say " thats the way life should be"
The Truth Must be Revealed
where the fear of shame takes over all, but they say " it IS God who we fear"
The Truth Must Be Revealed
some people step forward and others stay behind, why cant they just understand!
a change will not be made overnight ...and freedom!!
Freedom was left for my wildest dream
Indeed .....
This Truth Must Be Revealed
Sarah this is excellent, very well written. I think it is wonderful and very well said. Your point, that truth and freedom are worth struggling for is clearly made and your use of repetition is very effective. Keep writing, you have so much to say!
ReplyDeleteOh thank you Louise so much , I wasn't so sure if it was good or not but Im so glad you liked it, I will keep writing because you are right I do have alot to say.
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